December 20, 2007

My essay's process: from the weaning to the feeding

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A voice is that writing is not just an end result, but also a process that help you develop your ideas and think logically. This theory describes the whole part of picture--essay. I support this idea, hence in this essay I answer two questions, for one thing is which aspects are difficult, for another is what i have learned after finishing the essay.

I was so excited when i got the topic about this essay firstly, because i like the history very much especially the history of Uk, and i though i could handle it easily. Thus I began by brainstorming topic, collecting information, taking a lot of notes and asking a large amount of questions.  Neverthless, when I set about writing the draft of this essay. I found it was hard for me to organize my notes and sources. as a result, I wrote it blindly at the beginning. Moreover, when I developed my topic and looked for patterns and relationships of what i had written. I couldn't see what conclusions I can drew. because I found that i end up with  a different idea from the one i began with. 

I did not get rid of these troublesome issues by myself until i got the support from tutor, after discussing with tutor, I had the new perspective of understanding my essay,  consequently I strarted to re-organise my essay and rewrite it .   Personally speaking I felt that is much better than the first one, therefore I called the latter process "feed''. Nest i would address my experiences from the following aspects. which i had learned through writing this essay.

Firstly, in my opinion, understand the purpose of writing can help you develop the necesssary content and structure for essay.  Secondly, spend some time exploting your topics and ideas, you had better write down whatever comes to your mind related to the topic. Next, after spending a good deal of time brainstorming, start to develop a general outline for your essay and keep your outline as clear and direct as possible. Fourthly you should know what you wish to write and always have a goal in mind. fifthly, you could ask tutor or other friends to read over the draft, which is a good way to get another persons' opinions about what you have written. Finally, do not put too much pressure on yourself to write the perfect essay on the first try. you might discover new ideas that work better than the ideas you explored previously.

To sum up,   an essay is an attempt to put forward a case: develop an argument and explore ideas. By writing essays, I can develop my capabilities of solving problems and my communication skills. Moverover, I want to cite an advice which never gets old: practice makes perfect, the more writing you do, the better you will get, and as your skills improve, so will your enjoyment

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: 20 Dec 2007 21:38 |  Comments (1) |  Report a problem

October 18, 2007

learning english

As we all know there are three significant factors which decide you how well you learn English, namely vocabulary. listening and speaking. Personally speaking, to enlarge my vocabulary is a pressing matter of the moment. Only in this way can you read more smoothly and understand other well. I have a notebook which covered all the words that I have studied and is easy to take. I can review them at any time. Secondly I pay more attention to the listening and speaking ability in learning English. While talking with foreigners£¬ if I can't understand them£¬ and do not know how to express myself£¬ the talking will be very difficult. And the last point is that improving my English whenever and wherever I can. I do believe that the more you use English, the more I will want to learn it

Through my experiences, I discover movies and soap plays are of great help in promoting my interest in learning English. In fact, it is supposed to be a nice experience of studying a foreign language, if it were not, people would lose interest in and say no to it by instinct. In my opinion, the picture and the soap play are created to cater for people¡¯s needs for enjoyment, they also the best materials of English study, you can take advantage of movies (especially Disney cartoons) to practice your listening skills and enhance your pronunciation. Soap plays, like Friends, to some extent, show you a real daily life in America nowadays. With regards to students, those who are lack of language using environment, soap plays provide a virtual life in west for them to participate in. It can be imagined that their understanding of English culture background can be improved and they will know how to use English in a right way.

¡¡Obviously£¬ there is still a long way for me to go to learn English well. As a proverb says£¬ ¡°Never too old to learn.¡± There are so many methods to learn English. So long as I keep on studying£¬I do believe that my English will surely be improve


: 18 Oct 2007 23:58 |  Comments (1) |  Report a problem

learning english

As we all know there are three significant factors which decide you how well you learn English, namely vocabulary. listening and speaking. Personally speaking, to enlarge my vocabulary is a pressing matter of the moment. Only in this way can you read more smoothly and understand other well. I have a notebook which covered all the words that I have studied and is easy to take. I can review them at any time. Secondly I pay more attention to the listening and speaking ability in learning English. While talking with foreigners£¬ if I can't understand them£¬ and do not know how to express myself£¬ the talking will be very difficult. And the last point is that improving my English whenever and wherever I can. I do believe that the more you use English, the more I will want to learn it.

Through my experiences, I discover movies and soap plays are of great help in promoting my interest in learning English. In fact, it is supposed to be a nice experience of studying a foreign language, if it were not, people would lose interest in and say no to it by instinct. In my opinion, the picture and the soap play are created to cater for people¡¯s needs for enjoyment, they also the best materials of English study, you can take advantage of movies (especially Disney cartoons) to practice your listening skills and enhance your pronunciation. Soap plays, like Friends, to some extent, show you a real daily life in America nowadays. With regards to students, those who are lack of language using environment, soap plays provide a virtual life in west for them to participate in. It can be imagined that their understanding of English culture background can be improved and they will know how to use English in a right way.

¡¡Obviously£¬ there is still a long way for me to go to learn English well. As a proverb says£¬ ¡°Never too old to learn.¡± There are so many methods to learn English. So long as I keep on studying£¬I do believe that my English will surely be improve


: 18 Oct 2007 23:53 |  Comments (1) |  Report a problem

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