October 02, 2008

You've got to Start Somewhere…

Hi everyone. This is my first blog, so I apologise for any clumsiness. I'm going to use my blog primarily to get my work 'out there', as it were, and any feed back would be much appreciated. With that in mind, here's a very short poem, which I was tasked to write in my creative writing course yesterday. It's still floating round my head a bit, and may undergo some changes before next week, but at the moment I feel pretty good about it. As I said, any opinions would be welcome, whatever they may be. On that note:

The Chant

A word

Plunging, into the sea

Of swirls and patterns secluded in the deep

Roaring waves that tremble on ripples’ shoulders

A primordial, universal catechism

                                                                                                               


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