March 13, 2006

but i don't think a few words of mine are going to make you change your mind

1. about a boy
the mofo you love
to hate, but can't because you
love what haiku make

2. stick schtick
still determined?
i've tangled with your mind before
with five seven five

3. the ante is going to touch the sky
this time i'm tangling
with directly acquainted
mind melting belting

a visual representation of a haiku

4. a visual sky-haiku
centre to centre
syllable to syllable
haters – say "laters"


- 4 comments by 1 or more people Not publicly viewable

  1. For all the doubters:
    You gonna Touch the Sky, son
    with Brand New haikus!

    13 Mar 2006, 17:38

  2. Matt

    Your visual representation is… alive. My brain feels knotted.

    13 Mar 2006, 17:39

  3. it's alive! maha!
    systematic illusion
    mental confusion

    try doubting that!

    13 Mar 2006, 17:46

  4. anonymous

    mm, ok
    concent
    r i c..

    14 Mar 2006, 02:24


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