All entries for Saturday 15 April 2006

metaphor for essay progress

explanatory. representational
with time running out
the drama shall be captured
metaphorically
as we watch philosophers
lapping the lapin

stage one
haply at present
while we greatly desire brains
we are only just
scratching the golden surface:
efforts – redouble!

: 15 Apr 2006 02:21 |  Tags: Fiveku Sinthesis |  Comments (1) |  Close comments |  Report a problem

denigrate obtuse and active verbs pronouns

i take a sneaky glance into my "futuroscope". we seeng theez chaunt
this summer we'll jaunt
over sea: for not france nor
barcelona daunt
our fearless strutting gallore
which we can't but flaunt

barcapartament. cathedral
sun illumes absence
no phone in our apartment
the star of the sea
graceful from a different age
tangibly distal

windmilling. spilling
aquarium air
sits placidly weightless
as we run carefree
windmilling through leafs
in rustling bow waves

: 15 Apr 2006 01:56 |  Tags: Fiveku |  Comments (4) |  Close comments |  Report a problem