November 22, 2004

A poem by me

I am a fly, with a compound eye,
why, oh why?
SPLAT!
now I die!

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  1. Nick. You never fail to amuse me with your poetry. At least this one wasn't about mother.

    23 Nov 2004, 00:24

  2. Daniel O'Flynn

    Terrible, terrible terrible, actually made me want to read Sam's blog instead

    23 Nov 2004, 13:02

  3. Hmm…a vehement portrayal of ardent pessimism in a purely unostentatious form – I like it. Although I have to question Nicholas – why a fly? Is it symbolic of feelings of inferiority, a complex that the world is too large to conquer, disillusionment with life, or does it simply beat, I am a shed, now I am dead?

    24 Nov 2004, 13:27

  4. How come you never offer insightful analyses of my poems Kim?

    24 Nov 2004, 13:41

  5. And shut up Dan. You suck.

    24 Nov 2004, 13:41

  6. Darling Sammykins…I would comment on your resplendent and eloquent style of poetry but I have to scroll down about 100 billion people to get to the comments box, so I worry that you'll miss my insightful correspondance.

    PLUS Everyone knows Nick is totally taking the piss!

    24 Nov 2004, 22:39

  7. Unless Nick, you WERE a fly and in a past life you really did die – Sorry! I retract my inappropriate judgement on the seriousness of your blogging. :-)

    24 Nov 2004, 22:41

  8. diz

    i like the fly poem it woz kool and i no some1 called kim too

    16 Sep 2005, 09:45


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