March 29, 2006

No Animals Were Harmed…

When spilling your heart
for the sake of your art
it's hard to be clear
when it touches so near.
If you don't dot your "i"s
it can melt into lies;
your words may offend
and cause friendships to end.
So here's my disclaimer:
it's just a persona.

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  1. now, i have read this one –

    with the subject and rhyme scheme this is a poem from Ant street, Antville and the only problem i can see is that the flow gets a little thrown after the first half. tThe third couplet feels detached from the fourth which leaves the poem's final two lines without the build up they need.

    04 Apr 2006, 12:38


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