Castle Rising, 20/03/09, Jon Ware

March 20, 2009

I could tell you were frightened;

driving home in the summertime

to spread two layers of thick

matt paint across the new wood

where those kids had woken you

at one in the morning

kicking their hole in your fence.

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This is really good Jon. Nice understatement that subtly builds to an excellent final sentence. by on this entry
I like this a lot, you have a fast flowing style, I tend to get bogged down in describing everything… by Costa Del on this entry
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