October 23, 2014

秋日寓怀

秋日寓怀(唐·刘沧)
海上生涯一钓舟,偶因名利事淹留。旅涂谁见客青眼,故国几多人白头。
霁色满川明水驿,蝉声落日隐城楼。如何未尽此行役,西入潼关云木秋。

《贯华堂选批唐才子诗》:
斗地吐口,便有海上钓舟七字,自明胸中本非无算画者,无何淹留未决,直至今兹,真成两头俱误也。三承二,言淹留虽久,曾有何望?四承一,言淹留既久,多恐尽非也。一解,以一枝妙笔写两副伤心,无不坦然明净,此为先生能事也(首四句下)。写霁,则知连日雨潦之后;写蝉,则知三伏溽暑之余。既是行役未尽,那怕低头不就。然而心极念鲁,身反入秦,满心忖度,此果如何?“如何”二字,全领一解。人生一出门后,真有如此不可解事也(末四句下)。

《一瓢诗话》:
《秋日寓怀》:“旅涂谁见客青眼,故国几多人白头。”是无人垂青于我,乃疑天下人谁曾见人青眼;自羞鬓发星星,乃忆故园亲友多少白头。活现落魄人自叹自乐光景。

《东岩草堂评订唐诗鼓吹》:
朱东岩曰:题曰“寓怀”,通首皆写“寓怀”也。“霁色”、“蝉声”点出“秋日”二字意。


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