All entries for January 2008
After I saw this video, I know there are so many dangers for the children on the internet. Nowadays, most of teenagers have their own space, facebook, msn on the internet. they also put their names, age, home address, telephone No. on their space. This behavior just like they lift a board with all of these information stand on the street and make everyone to know. It is a danger, because it gives some bad guy a chance to approach them and hurt them. The video also give us some example to show how dangerous it is for the teenagers and parents.
This is the first time I do the assignment such like this(a 2000 words essay), and even now when I run back, I still feel excruciating. During this process, there are three points make me could not forget.
First, I must read a mass of books and material about the topic. And this work spand me a lot of time, and I must summarize the all of these imformation and give out my own idears, furthermore, I also want to choose same special or important idear to show, so it spand me so much time to prepare.
Second, it is a physical ordeal, because when I start to write, I could not stop, I must sit before the computer all the day and night, I do even not sleep for 48 hours, And when I finished, my neck and back were so painful.
Third, I must be careful about my words, because I must make sure every sentence is mine, and if a sentence is not form mine, I must give the source. This is the work I never do it before.
However, the process of my essay is a purgatory, but it is also a learning process. Through the reading, I really know some things about this topic, and I also learn some things around this topic. And although the process is a purgatory, when I finished it, I was very happy, because this time I try my hard to do it .