July 13, 2005

nonsense (sorry)

alrite then, here's an entry for you, as requested.

ahem
a love poem, by Ravenz23.

'Have I Ever'

Have I ever told you
that if I sit really still and silent,
sometimes. I like to think
I can hear your heart beating
in time with mine?

Have I ever told you
that when I watch you speak to me
through lines and cords,
and bytes and ram,
I imagine
your voice,
whispering into my ear?

Have I ever told you
that I wait out each day
in anticipation,
wanting
only an hour or two,
just a second in space and time,
to feel close to you?

Have I ever told you
that there has been times,
when I ached for you,
ached for you so badly,
that the emotions overwhelmed me..
and so I sat and cried?

Have I ever told you
that sometimes,
I will reach out,
touching your name
on this cold screen before me,
wishing
I could reach in
and pull you to me?

Have I ever told you
that after the first time I heard
the sound of your voice,
thousands of miles away,
I sat up all night,
turning the conversation over and over
in my mind,
examining it,
like some newly discovered species of flower?

Have I ever told you
that I would give everything up,
just for one night
to be able to lay near you,
to feel your chest rise and fall
with each breath you take,
just to know that you are real?

Have I ever told you
that I dream of you often,
I dream of you reaching out
and touching my hand,
simply to let me know
that you are there,
and everything is okay?

Have I ever told you,
have I still yet to tell you . . .
that I love you?

jesus christ, i'm glad i didn't write that. alright alright…if u want a proper poem…i won't try to beat 'somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond' by e.e. cummings. 'nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands'? too right!


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  1. Gordon R

    This heavy yoke that is mine to toil
    Hovers at my shoulder
    And does not yield as we
    walk together in those barren fields

    oh angst

    but cummings, yes
    and how about Elizabeth Barrett Browning "How much do I love thee?

    14 Jul 2005, 00:09

  2. Gordon R

    Oh hey! I am your secretary!

    14 Jul 2005, 00:20

  3. Carter

    Or how about this one from The Vandals:

    Congratulations, you're in love. The lonely nights are gone.
    But now you're making us all sick, the way you're carrying on.
    Put you're tongue in you're mouth, keep your hands off her ass
    It's a very sick public display
    – Have you no sense of shame?
    Oh get a room, we'll all pitch in – If you'll go away.

    String of spit connects your mouths, I'm trying hard not to look.
    And all the endless baby talk, is going to make me puke.
    I don't care who's the bigger Schmoopy head
    I'm hearing you talk and I wish I was dead
    – "Oh baby, oh honey, oh pumpkin, oh schnookums, oh baby".
    Get a room, I'll pay for it – if you'll go away. Go away.

    Bring it down a notch or two, you're gathering a crowd
    And I can tell from over here, you're visibly aroused.
    Don't dry hump in restaurants, it's unsanitary and rude
    Now it's dinner and a show, but I just wanted food…

    Well you're having a heated session, in the busiest intersection.
    Knock it off, now the light is green!
    Oh get a room – we'll all pitch in, if you'll go away.

    Go away. Go away. Go Away. Or break up. Or fuck off. Knock it off…

    14 Jul 2005, 12:13

  4. Carter

    Of course, whoever transcribed those lyrics on Google doesn't know the difference between "you're" and "your", but still… KEEP IT IN THE BEDROOM, FOR GAWD'S SAKE!

    14 Jul 2005, 12:14

  5. the opposite of what he said

    14 Jul 2005, 15:26


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