April 27, 2005

Mattanory – Donkey Punch: Thursday 1–3pm on RaW 1251AM

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Here, for your literary pleasure, are both Mattanory stories from last week. And hello by the way!

Missing by Matthew Briant aged 9
Last week I lost my favourite wrestling toy. The day before I was playing with it in the car and on the day I lost it. I was thinking where could it be. I looked high and low, I looked in every nook and cranny except for one particular place. It was behind the drawing pad near the telephone!

More of an anecdote than a story, but it was still full of suspense. I like the 'on the day I lost it', it makes me sound like a football manager. Anyway, onwards! For the next story I had to write a first and second draft. I like this one for the drastic changes in characters between takes, be they human or animal…read on:

The Haunted House by Matthew Briant aged 9
One sunny day Jane and Paul where playing football, suddenly Jane kicked the ball too high and it went over the brick wall. Paul and Jane climbed on the wall then Jane saw the ball. While Paul picked up the ball Jane looked through a broken window, then Jane said "Paul do you have the feeling someone was watching you" "nonsense" said Paul "but then again maybe you're right." Paul and Jane both looked through the window then they saw yellow eyes staring at them there was a silence then Paul and Jane walked back ran off home got their water-pistols, toy swords and set off. When they went in the house Paul first then Jane but then they saw a black cat. Nobody owned the house nor the cat so Jane had to look after it. Paul already had a dog and things were fine.
Second Try
Paul looked through the window. There staring through the darkness of the house were two eyes that blinked at Paul.
"Michael do you have the feeling someone or something was watching you?" Paul said.
"Nonsense" said Michael. "But then again maybe youre right."
Michael came up to Paul. Michael saw the eyes and they was a silence. Michael and Paul ran home to get their water-pistols and toy swords and set off back to the house. When they got back there weren;t just two eyes but three pairs of eyes. Three black stripes. Paul and Michael went in and found a family of racoons. They rushed home and called a zoo keeper and found out that the racoons were missing from the zoo and things turned out to be fine.

No suspense in the latter version but the racoons were a twist worthy of M. Night Shyamalan! In fact it's better because the racoons aren't predictable. More Mattanory next week.

Don't forget to tune into the show on Thursday at 1, but until then why not vote for RaW in the Web Radio Awards? Raw's up for several categories and all votes would be most welcome. You can access the site here. And why not ask them to nominate Donkey Punch for Best God-like Show or something?

Cheers!

Matt xx


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