February 13, 2011

#34

I ought to go to sleep.

The stars are calling out and screaming ‘stay’.

My slumber should be deep.

The cold cool moon is bright this New Year’s day. 


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  1. Kimberley Simpson

    it has gentle lyricism. it flows. rhyme scheme isn’t forced. like.

    16 Feb 2011, 00:25


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