January 20, 2009

Third Party

What if I was you

And you were me

And we saw in each other

A band of three.

Who is that third person?

Do I imagine he or she or it

What is your name?

Love, Pain, Hate,

Or maybe john or sue down the lane.

And in the train station

(it arrived at half past four)

I saw the creation –

Of the world on the 7th platform,

And that third party

Was orchestrating this particular piece

Gesticulating in the smoke filled space

That was the 5th day; you want me to believe?


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