May 03, 2005

Poems from a Blacker Soul

This one is called "I like her"

Theres a girl I like
But she doesnt like me like
we like what we like
but what she likes isnt me

Oh Fate!
The Greeks had it right

Oh why doesn't she love me?
Or like me or something?
Cruel passion, cruel desire
why do you torment me with this hardon?

Love me, like me
Acknoledge me!
Why try harder,
When I dont exist to her?

My soul of glass
shatters on her icy stare
of not liking me
At all.

- 5 comments by 1 or more people Not publicly viewable

  1. I propose this as a follow up:

    Staring right through me,
    My soul so transparent
    To her, but to me it shines
    As the sun on morning dew

    If I could sell my dreams
    Just to wake up in your arms
    I would for then I'd never
    Want to fall asleep again

    And yet you pass me
    Day by day, not seeing
    That inside my heart beats
    in 7/8 for your love

    03 May 2005, 23:27

  2. Hywel – 7/8 heart beat: you're prog to the core sir.

    Chris, try buying her some bubble wrap, girls love bubble rap. I might be wrong though. Give it a go. No, seriously.

    Who is she?? – Otherwise i would have to assume Mrs D.

    08 May 2005, 21:02

  3. Otter

    "who is she??"?

    Mind your own, you nosy parker. My poetry reaches people, man! The metafor! The similys! i rule

    08 May 2005, 22:16

  4. Ok… Who isn't she?
    And why haven't you got her any bubblewrap??

    08 May 2005, 22:59

  5. she isn't anyone – except the one she isn't not being.

    And I can't afford bubblewrap, I was hoping just some foam packing chips would do

    10 May 2005, 17:00

Add a comment

You are not allowed to comment on this entry as it has restricted commenting permissions.

May 2005

Mo Tu We Th Fr Sa Su
Apr |  Today  | Jun
2 3 4 5 6 7 8
9 10 11 12 13 14 15
16 17 18 19 20 21 22
23 24 25 26 27 28 29
30 31               

Search this blog



Most recent comments

  • –A straight girl, a bi girl, or a lesbian who just isn't picky? It works with both genders you know … by J on this entry
  • I doubt it's because she lied when she was 17 by on this entry
  • Train rides do suck a lot – riding two trains to Liskeard in Cornwall via Reading… never nice; but… by Chris on this entry
  • I would say "Cheer up Chris" and then slap you until you agreed to cheer up. But I have sourced a fa… by Milly on this entry
  • NO! don't be so sad! Just be thankful you haven't got a whole day of school+a veeeery long train rid… by on this entry

Blog archive

Not signed in
Sign in

Powered by BlogBuilder