..The World Is Going To End in 6 Hours.., 06/12/07, cjones the blog

December 06, 2007

Exercise: A three or four line poem about what you would do in the face of the certainty of your demise within the next 6 hours.

...BLUEBELLS...

Now, my kiss can trust you.

It is the unevaluated promise:

A deep clammy dedication,

fearless of it's future.

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