November 19, 2005

ii – Time after Time

Chance, I hit upon
A song long forgotten
Or perhaps never really known
Lyric-less but singing
Like arms opened

Hard cities
Harder loves lost
The strange familiar
Look in every colour eye
Shy and yet un-shy

Hanging notes
Dropped to float
Travelling back
To the hand that bites
The heart that feeds it.


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  1. Missy, as you missed the exec meeting for the most pathetic reason ever I expect a Harry Potter inspired poem asap as punishment.

    20 Nov 2005, 23:46

  2. this has a very pretty poem. i think the middle stanza spoils its lyrical feel as it's a bit muddled and twists the tongue a bit too much and i'm not a fan of 'ilke arms opened'...feels like it should have another line after it – not a hit of the return key.

    14 Dec 2005, 16:53


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