God's Computer
[THE BEGINNING]
NEBULOUS CLOUDS FORMING GALACTIC PUZZLE SHAPES
ERROR
C:// NEBULOUS_CLOUDS.GALACTIC/FORMING/PUZZLE_SHAPES
ERROR
[CTRL/ALT/DEL]
C:// WORD…
…......
…
SYSTEM EXECUTABLE SYNTAX ACQUIRED…
C://WHARF-SAPIR
ERROR EROR ERROR
C:// DAMMIT.
[CTRL/ALT/DEL]
C:// WORD, THE
[/BEGINNING]
I don't like it. I say this someone who has spent considerable time watching a blinking dos cursor. I think this sort of thing should work but it is doing nothing for me. Perhaps it's because you adopt the outward style of computer code superficially – if this poem were in English instead of Dos it would seem plain.
07 Jan 2006, 12:43
Not that it's a poem.
07 Jan 2006, 12:43
Not being a dick there, I just noticed that it's not in the "Poetry" category :)
07 Jan 2006, 12:44
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