God's Computer, 07/01/06, Galactic Teabag

January 07, 2006

[THE BEGINNING]

NEBULOUS CLOUDS FORMING GALACTIC PUZZLE SHAPES

ERROR

C:// NEBULOUS_CLOUDS.GALACTIC/FORMING/PUZZLE_SHAPES

ERROR

[CTRL/ALT/DEL]

C:// WORD…

…......

…

SYSTEM EXECUTABLE SYNTAX ACQUIRED…

C://WHARF-SAPIR

ERROR EROR ERROR

C:// DAMMIT.

[CTRL/ALT/DEL]

C:// WORD, THE

[/BEGINNING]

I don't like it. I say this someone who has spent considerable time watching a blinking dos cursor. I think this sort of thing should work but it is doing nothing for me. Perhaps it's because you adopt the outward style of computer code superficially – if this poem were in English instead of Dos it would seem plain.

07 Jan 2006, 12:43
Not that it's a poem.

07 Jan 2006, 12:43
Not being a dick there, I just noticed that it's not in the "Poetry" category :)

07 Jan 2006, 12:44

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